Fog Storm
What do you think of this poem?
I fell into poetry lately and I wrote a few. Here is an example of my work. What do you think Books The style, the piece comments on this post that you want. But please be honest, I want to know if my writing must be improved. —– I look out the window the clouds dotted the sky too anxious I remember why I dare not go step outside, I was warm welcome from the many times this day, but the wind changes, I put the storm, I was struck by the sun burned through storms, I am blinded by the fog Hi bombarded Maybe there is something to be, after playing, if I dared all out to look without some risk, but we can not really grow is so much safer, but I need have no worries to be protected by this barrier only here, I can not I look out the window injured the clouds of heaven but I was speckled wonder why this fear can not defy me?
It is beautiful. Working on yourself things in a natural way. I understand you said: "These concerns do not challenge me" to meet your rhymes, but people do not really talk though. Find the perfect expression incompatible Only your form, but also real tones.
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